Lawson:writing sample T.3-3

orientation .Mum,sister Jane. .evening. .home. .Jane putting on costume. .for Halloween. body .dress looks like it’s soft like silk. .Jane’s belt thing rustling. I see mum and my sister Jane.Mum is helping Jane put on her costume for halloween.I realise that I am home and the time of day is not morning, nor night, it is evening. I see Jane’s dress and it looks like it is smooth like silk, I come towards Jane and feel her dress, it does feel smooth like silk. I ask mum where they got the dress from, “I made it by myself,” says mum.I can hear Jane’s golden belt thing rustling. “let me add a little more and I’ll be done,” mum says in a relieved voice.I can smell the scent of the candy at the front door,chocolate, lollipops, and wrapped up slices of cake!I want to go to the front door and take some candy but mum stops me and says, “ the candy is for the other kids, not us” so I stay inside. I think halloween is a great day and in the Christian church, it is called all saints’ day, I think it is also called, ‘hallows day’. I heard that they used to dress up as monsters to scare the dead spirits away!