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Tuesday, 11 November 2014

Mary Mackillop centre trip

WALT describe a moment in time.


S.C.We need to:
.Just describe the moment in the photo.
                                                              .keep to the picture.
                                                              .no before or after.
.explain where+why you are there.
.use the present tense.
.use descriptive words.
.what we see,hear,taste,smell, touch or taste


Screenshot 2014-10-21 at 2.14.54 PM.pngPlan:
.hear voices chattering about Ben on trampoline.
.feel wet because of the water sphere.
.I think its midday.
.in the yard of the Mary Mackillop centre.
.Because the water sphere looks interesting.
Mary Mackillop centre
I hear voices chattering and laughing about Ben playing on a trampoline. I am in the yard of the Mary Mackillop centre with the school for our trip. It seems as if it is midday. I see an interesting water ball.


A bunch of people gather around the sphere. I feel water dripping on my shoes. The water makes a splashing sound when it reaches the small pool underneath it. I spot one person out of the corner of my eye touching the water sphere. I smell the food some of the people behind me are eating.

I wonder why they have this in there garden. Maybe the sphere represents Jesus and the water represents the water of his baptism.

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